Riddle-Sam

https://www.wattpad.com/story/365250847?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=Riddle-Sam
          
          This is the first chapter of my story. Please, it won't take you more than ten minutes to read it _ I just need feedback.
          The description is as follows:
          Nehody's Insights, probably as enigmatic as Iris herself, carries ominous yet relevant secrets. Even though her attention was drawn to the swimming spiders above, deep concern lived inside her, nagging her desire to unravel the secrets of such an enchanted school.

xxxunknownstar

Hye guys, if you like fantasy and adventure you can check out my story. It's about a girl who found herself in an unknown world but the one who has sent her their was her own brother. This story has action as well as romance (not the cringe one)
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/347092084?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=xxxunknownstar&wp_originator=p0b4j4fRaJ2OpKbuyr5FtgSY2NaqlknEuqKkeTsCIWtSO%2FKOT%2BuXlVHNF93GPfWXWeEr7anaPRCePtbKvAabdSIvW2m4eZUCC3noIyxgw7vAaK28e56qGjvLhNhUlTzS