Thank you for the vote on my story, "Kā Te Kāntā? Kas Te Jāmātā?" - Prologue. How should Sulochana behave with Raghav?

Thank you again, this time for your votes on my parody, "Sperm Count Test," and my story, "Antarāya-timir'opaśāntaye" - Chapters One and Two. Please don't hesitate to tell me what you liked (or not) about my stories - the characters, situations etc.?

Thanks again for the vote on "Delivery Boy" - Chapter Three. What do you think of the progress between Raghav and members of Pallavi's family? Is it believable?