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Will you go back to writing Ninjago watching?

Sorry for the lack of updates about Watching Ninjago. I lost lots of motivation for it. I hope I'll have motive in 2024.

u better have a AMAZING chapter out for the next eps on ninjago with all the time youve had

Watching Ninjago will be completed when the rest of season 1 of Dragons rising/untied is out

Lloyd and Wu would be getting some flashbacks in episode 5 of Dragons risings

Wu on his death bed be like: nInJa ThErE's SoMeThInG i HaVeN't ToLd YoU

Bruce Wayne  Molly Weasley
          Adopting a neglected child

Ok I'll give my review on your ninajgo fic here. My critic is. The characters are way too many like you just shove all the characters down and they appear out if nowhere. Theere is a severe lack of reactions to everything, even at the interesting moments or dialogues, THERE WERE ZERO REACTIONS. There's no depth or emotion in their reactions and comments!
           Its just so lacking, no offence.  The reactions are too few and bland.
          
          And doesn't the "she" the samurai already supposed  to know all of this, being from the future in all  so why is she THERE reacting with them, she has no reason to. Also the samurai is "her" rigth? 
          
          And lastly is the dialogue, its very off putting to read the narrative and the reaction dialogue mixed together.
          
          The only I can positively say about this is that you managed to do all thes seasons and is still going. So points for this.
          
          I know I'm sounding very rude rigth now but there is a very lare room for improvement.

Hello I want to make smal request. Can you add air quotes to the dialogue reactions please! Its very hard to read when you don't

(Ninjago Crystalized spoilers)
          
          
          It was I who possessed the serpent that bit your hand! It was I who corrupted the Great Devourer and set him against you! All that has happened was by my design! The Devourer was merely a prawn. Set in motion by me to provide a worthly vessel for my return! Now, at last, I have such a vessel! I am complete!