Please check out my book Faerie kingdom. I would to get your feedback.

Follback ya kak

If not, best of luck editing your story. Hope it turns into a wattpad novel one day.

If you need help, I'm available. I'm seriously not joking. I have links of book writing/improving websites and Wattpad how to write a book link. 

Edit your book. I look forward to seeing the rest.