usleo151
tell me what bothers you the most?
usleo151
usleo151
Been a long time since I posted anything :/ motivation he ni mil raha
Qulub_Mutasila
Hey, would you please read my story 'Bin tere' I can bet you'll love it! Keep smiling because it's suits you!♡♡♡
usleo151
@Qulub_Mutasila I don't promise janab but I'll try if it was poetry I'll do it very quick but I'll try how about you give me a review too? On mine hayat e Sham?
Imaandreamer
Salam
Mene youtube pe *Tooba kiran poetry* k name se channel bnaya hai.. jaa kr subscribe kr dain aur sunain bhi like bhi karain i hope aap ko pasand ayay gi.. waiting
usleo151
@Imaandreamer yes I did look at it I commented too but abi suni ni inshallah I'll listin to them
usleo151
Kyun barosa krty ho unki batun ka tum tabish
Kabi hum be unki pehli muhabat howa krty thy
usleo151
The tittles of what I think I'll write next in poems
1 Tum dor ho kr be yad aty ho
2 sansoun say shart na lagao myri
3 zulfun may tyri sharyari mili mujy
Any ideas? Recommendations?
usleo151
May apny lafzun sy tujy apna banato lun likin Tyra dil inki garmi bardasht ni kr skta
usleo151
May wo hun jo tyry badtareen din may be tyri zulfun may shayri dund lay
usleo151
Tyri puri tawaja ki talab gar hein hum
usleo151
Change the name of my book to hayat e Sham updated a new part I didn't put much effort but tell me. How it is?