user57445959

It makes the story more enjoyable if u do a big time skip and tehn the character is insome situtations where he remembers one of the moments in the time skip 
          Like how you did in the latest chapter of u were the reason

user57445959

Nice job with the story given how life is busy for 11th and 12th graders
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user57445959

Is there a limit to how many 'parts' you can vote coz if I vote some chapter then after a few weeks they get unvoted somehow

user57445959

It's like a character which is rectangle and all squares are connected and is vertical
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utsav2000512

@user57445959 what do you mean exactly? 
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user57445959

Hey do you also know why are some charaters are like a rectangle with one pair of diagonals connected and rotated in standing position
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user57445959

I feel like you should add some more insults in chapter one
          It doesn't feel enough for him to leave 
          Also edit the insults too there were some punctuation mistakes

utsav2000512

@user57445959 I know bro. I want to edit it too
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user57445959

Also make chp 2 a bit more realistic like natsu didn't ask him to train but zeref knocked natsu out and that's where he the memories from and then natsu asked zeref to train him
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user57445959

Dude delete the pic and draw it in a computer in the feature/app/function called 'paint' it's unprofessional!!
          
          
          
          
          Was really excited when I saw the notification. But that was the first thought of my mind when I saw the pic  
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          Anyways ur chapters are amazing!!

utsav2000512

@user57445959 Nah man it only took me 15 minutes to make it
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user57445959

Much better !!
            Sure a hard worker you are!!
            
            
            Can't wait for the update
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utsav2000512

@user57445959 I Changed the map for you bro. Check it out ☺️
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user57445959

So I am going to assume yesterday ur boards were finished.          Also can I guess if you are a boy or girl based or ur story

user57445959

People generally tend to make stories which revolve around their gender.  Generally 
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user57445959

How did you come up with the name venono?
          When does ur board starts?
          U are in 12 right?

utsav2000512

@user57445959 my boards starts from 30th of this month
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utsav2000512

@user57445959 no man I am in 10th. And for the name, my mind just gave me that name
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user57445959

Why can't Wendy or gajeel tell who Nata is by his smell? 
          
          A plothole you can clear telling nasty is using somesort of magic or something among those lines!!
          
          
          Also make an entrance of the seven dragons from the future rogue arc!  It will be fun 
          
          Just an idea!!

utsav2000512

@user57445959 No I came back and trying to type whenever I am free but you know boards are there so it just that I am not getting much time but you can expect new chapter by next week
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utsav2000512

@user57445959 no man sorry but I had another idea for that. 
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user57445959

Also you are continuing the story or are you still in hometown
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