sonderonce
Hey can you please check out my poetry... I'd love some feedback
https://www.wattpad.com/story/91752591-love-poetry
utt017
That's a good collection you have got there . But I have a suggestion which you can ignore if you Wang to . You know just try using a little more rhyme, I think it will be more interesting. JUST a suggestion. And I love how explain every detail of the situation and emotions.All the best.
