@tinyspacekitten_ If you think a story that starts bad will stay bad, check out my story Ave. Start with the one with the red bird -- that's the first draft. Clogged with plot issues to the point of a coronary, but I pushed through it for a second draft.
I really want to but I have no motivation to do it ;-; I want to rewrite it just because I don't like some of it. I wish I could write the sequel but there's no point if it's going to be crappy. :/
Wow. 400 reads on Altered? Wow. That's all I can say. You are all amazing people, you know that! I posted that book thinking I might get a few views and votes but this, even though it might seem like a little is insane. You're all awesome people for just reading this. I can't thank you enough for making me feel like I'm a sorta good writer. :3
@AmberKalkes13 I was reading the pages so fast trying to figure out what happens, and then I read the last few lines and I think I might have went "Nuuuuu!" Out loud. Then I saw that it was in the short story genre and actually did say it out loud. I am so into this story. I can't wait! Thanks for replying! :D