valbykyle

Hi everyone, this is Kyle.
          	
          	
          	I just want to let you all know that I’ll be unpublishing my story “Collateral of Asterisk” for now.
          	
          	Over the past few weeks, I’ve been in complete turmoil trying to make sense of where the plot was going. Honestly, I lost track of it, and I realized I need to reread everything just to understand what really happened and where I want the story to go. I admit—I wasn’t responsible enough in keeping the structure intact. And I want to fix that.
          	
          	My goal is to make the story more polished and understandable for all of you. That means I’ll be moving some scenes to different chapters (some didn’t really belong where I placed them ), and cutting parts that were unnecessarily overwritten. I used to stress over whether my chapters were “long enough,” but I’ve now learned that quality matters more than length.
          	
          	I know the flow has been a bit confusing—even for me—so I’ll be doing some serious revisions to make it all smoother and more cohesive.
          	
          	The story isn’t finished yet, but I want you, my readers, to truly understand and feel what’s going on, without the mess and confusion.
          	
          	I promise to come back with a better, cleaner, and more solid version of “Collateral of Asterisk.”
          	
          	This is ValbyKyle. Thank you so much, and I hope you all have a great day.

valbykyle

@valbykyle I’ve also been thinking… maybe when I bring the story back, it’ll return as a completed one.  But of course, that’s going to take a lot of time, effort, and rewriting. It won’t be easy, but I want to give you a version of Collateral of Asterisk that’s truly worth your time.
          	  
          	  I hope that sounds good to you, my Kys. 
          	  Thank you for being patient with me. I’ll be taking my time to write this properly, and I genuinely appreciate you sticking with me through this.
          	  
          	  You’re the reason I keep going.
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valbykyle

Hi everyone, this is Kyle.
          
          
          I just want to let you all know that I’ll be unpublishing my story “Collateral of Asterisk” for now.
          
          Over the past few weeks, I’ve been in complete turmoil trying to make sense of where the plot was going. Honestly, I lost track of it, and I realized I need to reread everything just to understand what really happened and where I want the story to go. I admit—I wasn’t responsible enough in keeping the structure intact. And I want to fix that.
          
          My goal is to make the story more polished and understandable for all of you. That means I’ll be moving some scenes to different chapters (some didn’t really belong where I placed them ), and cutting parts that were unnecessarily overwritten. I used to stress over whether my chapters were “long enough,” but I’ve now learned that quality matters more than length.
          
          I know the flow has been a bit confusing—even for me—so I’ll be doing some serious revisions to make it all smoother and more cohesive.
          
          The story isn’t finished yet, but I want you, my readers, to truly understand and feel what’s going on, without the mess and confusion.
          
          I promise to come back with a better, cleaner, and more solid version of “Collateral of Asterisk.”
          
          This is ValbyKyle. Thank you so much, and I hope you all have a great day.

valbykyle

@valbykyle I’ve also been thinking… maybe when I bring the story back, it’ll return as a completed one.  But of course, that’s going to take a lot of time, effort, and rewriting. It won’t be easy, but I want to give you a version of Collateral of Asterisk that’s truly worth your time.
            
            I hope that sounds good to you, my Kys. 
            Thank you for being patient with me. I’ll be taking my time to write this properly, and I genuinely appreciate you sticking with me through this.
            
            You’re the reason I keep going.
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valbykyle

Im in full turmoil right now.. I got lost of my plot now im really questioning what i am writting. Some of the details are over written and now im super lost because i no nothing about being in college and im trying my best to make it okay and fixed. 
          
          And i just cant help but feel so helpless. I really thought this is going to work and now im facing my wall questioning what to doooooo
          
          but i hope that this will go right.
          
          COF wasn't supposed to be dual pov but i thought that maybe if i put another pov it could add some magic and yes it did.  But nowwww is just soo messsyyyyyy
          
          i just hope that i could fix this. Huhuhu

castabelle

@valbykyle welcomee!
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valbykyle

@valbykyle THANK YOUU<33
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castabelle

@valbykyle hi! I've been there and it really sucks. The only thing I can advise is to outline your plot first chapter by chapter because that's what I did with mine (which is also set in college halfway) But then, I'm already a college student so I didn't have any hard time writing some experiences I had.
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revessurpapier

Hi! Permission to plug po.
          I'm a new writer on Wattpad and I just published my story. I hope you can check it out!
          
          Title: That Summer Rain We Didn’t Expect
          Genre: Romance
          Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/394361622?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=revessurpapier
          
          Thank you so much and happy reading! Also open for vtv and ftf.

valbykyle

@revessurpapier Keep Writting<33
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