JuanpeStar

He publicado la parte 1 del capitulo 3 de mi fanfiction Gundam Build Divers Re Rise Odyssey, en el que lo publiqué primero en español y mas tarde en ingles, asi que disfrutadlo, y perdonad que haya tardado en publicar, quería que estuviera bien el relato de esa parte, pero merecio la pena, y muchas gracias por vuestra comprension y disfrutad, que es algo que sera nuevo y original os lo prometo.
          
          I've published part 1 of chapter 3 of my fanfiction Gundam Build Divers Re Rise Odyssey, which I first published in Spanish and later in English, so enjoy it, and sorry for the delay. I wanted to make sure the story in that part was good, but it was worth it, and thank you very much for your understanding. Enjoy it; it's something new and original, I promise.

JuanpeStar

What do you think about the scene where Maiya used the Permet Score with it's gunpla in Part 3 means that fought against Stola in it's gunpla, and that in Part 4 Hans used a magic spell for the first time in history in which Hiroto and Riku end up in a world unknown to Earth, GBN and Eldora in which it would have to do with the spell that Hans cast with his gunpla?

JuanpeStar

Well, anyway, I've just started, and looks aren't everything (sometimes), but I must tell you that the Gunplas you'll see (some of them) will have fantasy aspects with magic, and believe me, it will be worth it, I just ask that you give me a chance.
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valedonte

@JuanpeStar It's an interesting idea, but remember, we already have an alien planet in Gundam Build Divers Re:RISE Eldora and there is nothing wrong with bringing in more alien worlds into the storyline of Fanfiction, just don't make it a habit, and as for the Magic, I don't know about that, if Hans was going to do Magic, he should've designed his Gunpla in the look of a Spellcaster, not in the look of what he currently designed it as.
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JuanpeStar

He publicado la cuarta y ultima parte del capítulo 2 de mi fanfiction de "Gundam Build Divers Re Rise Odyssey", aunque ahora está en español, pero lo pondré en ingles esta misma semana. Gracias.
          
          
          I've posted fourth and last part of chapter 2 of my Gundam Build Divers Re Rise Odyssey fanfiction. It's currently in Spanish, but I'll put it in English this week. Thanks.

JuanpeStar

About that part I've already fixed, the part 3 of my fanfic, but what do you think of the fight between Hiroto and Freddie, and of course the gunpla battle between Maiya and Stola with their gunplas, especially the last two and how he did it.

JuanpeStar

He publicado la parte 3 del capítulo 2 de mi fanfiction de "Gundam Build Divers Re Rise Odyssey", tanto en español como en ingles. Disfrutadlo.
          
          I've posted part 3 of chapter 2 of my Gundam Build Divers Re Rise Odyssey fanfiction. It's in Spanish and in English. Enjoy it.

JuanpeStar

Ya he publicado la parte 4 del capítulo 1 y he publicado la parte 1 del nuevo capitulo, el capitulo 2, y por supuesto en ingles, y también he publicado la ficha del personaje Hans para que podáis saber algo más de él, aunque iré actualizando conforme vaya avanzando la historia. He publicado dos partes esta semana, porque la semana que viene es la semana santa y quisiera pasar esa semana con mi familia. 
          
          He añadido en la parte 1 del capitulo 2 (en idioma español y en el idioma ingles) una encuesta en que me gustaría que la contestarais esa encuesta , y os estaré muy agradecido que lo hagáis. Así que disfrutad. Y por favor, contestad la encuesta que he puesto en el capitulo 2. 
          
          
          I've already published Part 4 of Chapter 1 and Part 1 of the new chapter, Chapter 2, both in English. I've also published Hans's character sheet so you can learn more about him, though I'll keep updating it as the story progresses. I published two parts this week because next week is Holy Week, and I'd like to spend it with my family.
          
          I've added a poll to Part 1 of Chapter 2 (in both Spanish and English), and I'd really appreciate it if you would answer it. So enjoy! And please, take the poll I included in Chapter 2.

JuanpeStar

I've posted part 3 of chapter 1 of my Gundam Build Divers Re Rise Odyssey fanfiction, in both Spanish and English. Enjoy reading!
          
          He publicado la parte 3 del capítulo 1 de mi fanfiction de Gundam Build Divers Re Rise Odyssey, tanto en español como en ingles. ¡Que lo disfrutes leyendo!