valentina73mb

Hey everyone!
          	
          	The new update is incredible! You're all going to love it, I’m sure of it! I can't wait to hear what you think, so make sure to check it out and let me know your thoughts. It's going to be awesome! 
          	
          	

Neha974

Hi,i just read the first part of your story and i really like it. Especially the mom and Sofia once. Your story is really beautiful ❤️❤️❤️.
          
          I hope we both support each other in writing and reading in both . 
          
          In the last my Neha . 
          
          

Hearts4aarii

Hii,I just read your book and it's really good but maybe you can try and make the chapters longer but overall it's a good book! 

valentina73mb

@Hearts4aarii I tried to do this on chapter 7 and I will do this in the next chapters, thank you so much for your feedback that's mean alot to me.
            
            Love you beauty 
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iheartdavee

hi love, i read ur book just now and i wanted to give my opinion on it like u asked. im not a professional but just giving my opinions on the book. i like the plot of the book alot but i think chapters should be a little longer so there can be more build up in the story. also i suggest you add more tags to your books so it can grow alot more. the background pic for the cover is okay but maybe change the font to something else. i don't have much to say other than that but i like ur book and wish you well with it  ❤️

iheartdavee

@valentina73mb ofc lovee also love the new cover it's so cute
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valentina73mb

@iheartdavee 
            
            "Thanks for your feedback and suggestions! You’re totally right. I changed the cover and I’m also planning to revise the chapters and their endings and let it littlelonger like the last chapter . Thanks again, I really appreciate you!"
            
            
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valentina73mb

@iheartdavee can you check the new cover ?
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