valerywashere

to reply to ur status... ur story was getting somewhere when u were working on it... u just need to keep it focused on what u want to happen and go from there, then ur story might start moving along better....
          sNoWlgHt
          :) keep working on it 

i liked it, keep it up it was intense... :)
          but question, did the person that was shot die??
          sNowlgHt