veronica

im gonna start writing draft of the makeover this weekend if i have the time lol

i remember there was this one reader on the story who would comment on every chapter and as the story progressed, idk if it was like a joke or not but that person did end up saying eventually that adam started to like lose his character.. in the beginning of the story i made him seem more like adam from the show but once it hit like chapter 17(?) i made him SO ooc that the one reader had to point it out. and i do see what they meant by that now ugh. so YEAH holy yap, but thats my take on this god awful story. uh since this story I've only written one other work and posted it, on ao3 not here. But i may take that one down too and rework it cuz its actually pretty bad. uhm but now that im an honors english student officially and im in ap english i should probably live up to my role and fix this shit or it's gonna haunt me for the rest of my life. my biggest inspiration for doing this is gt golden trashbag, my absolute goat. so yeah. uh official rework on the adamsapple fic starts after season 2 of hazbin comes out. so next week. i would start it this week but im busy with acapella shit unfortunately this week, and also the day season 2 hits prime. but im starting it asap and it's gonna be better i swear thx u guys

erm i have reread the hazbin story over and over like 5 times already and everytime i read it again i cringe more and more. i started writing that thing like, early or mid 8th grade and now that im (slightly) older and im in early sophomore year now i feel like i should definitely give it a rewrite whereas it's not so sloppy and underdeveloped. a lot of times the characters are ooc, like i made adam say a lot of stuff he'd never say without even giving him character development first, because if i at least gave him character development first then it would make a little more sense. I also made lucifer say a lot of things he wouldn't say. i tried with the "lucifer had autism" headcanon and while it works and makes sense, the way i wrote that into his character didn't make sense at ALL lmao. and the smut was pretty messy, the jokes didnt make sense, and the dialogue was 85% of the time shitty. everytime i log back on this app and see more people saving and voting for this story and following me because of it i think.. howww do you think this is good? i really dont like it lol. no offense to anyone whos a recent reader of that story i just dont really get it. idk

hey its been 2 months like i said id be back lol
          im dreading this a lot but also i kinda wanna go back to writing? it might help me feel a little more grounded considering whats going on in my stupid ass country (america) and school life..

i forgot to come back LMAO no guys im not gonna continue writing at least for like two more months beecuz schools about to start and ntm my writers block is still definitely there... uh after some reading inspo tho ive made it up that im gonna REWRITTEE the adamsapple story, when i feel like it ofc... im not as interested in hazbin as i was when i made it bug with s2 coming up (which im definitely gonna watch) and after i thoroughly reread everything thats already there, uhhhhhhhh! this current version isnt very good my writing sucks and the story just like doesn't make a lot of sense so I definitely have to fix it don't let me forget OKAY BYE

heello everyone i wanna go back ro writing but i dont so I'm going to reread everything on my lists and see how i feel afterwards ill be back

man I'm single again, back to writing fanfics 

im highkey bawling my eyes out why did i check my notifications on here after being gone forever and see that someone added my fic to a list called "stories i didnt like"  thanks for being honest ig LMAO 

CHAPPELL ROAN WON BEST NEW ARTIST AT THE VMAS AAHHHH

hii guys today marks my first day of school so nothing out for a bit, but ima try getting the next chapter out by the 30th