Jasmine

hey you.......yes you looking at screen 
          
          im kinda a newbe it would mean alot to me if you could take a look at my story, i know that they arent grate cuz i just started writing....... 
          
          see if you could tell me what you REALLY think like what im good at and what i need work on that would help SO much....... 
          
          because all the people that have read it say like 'good work' or 'keep going' but that dont help me get better so i would be really thankful if you did this... 
          
          michelle

hey whatsup just seeing if you would check out my story and comment and telll me what you think. I would definetly appreciate it
          http://www.wattpad.com/244905-how-can-i-ever-get-passed-this

thanks for becoming a fan :D it means the world! ♥

Hey :)
          
          I'd be more than happy to read your uploads, all I ask in return is that you read mine and perhaps give me some feedback to if you could? It'd be really appreciated!
          I'm a new writer and my first and only story (so far) is called In the World of Women.
          If you do check it out and give me some feedback -drop me a message letting me know you've done so, and I'll be sure to check your works out too!
          
          d4l
          xxxx
          

hey theree. i couldn't help but notice your username had "vampire" in it, which leads me to believe you're a fan of vampires.. (i know, i've got skill..)
          SO since i think you may be a fan of vampires, i think it would be in both of our best interests for you to check out my story Sarah Serenity. it's of the vampire-persuasion ;D haha you may like it, and if you don't, you are permitted to b*tch-slap me should we ever meet(:

Heyy
          I was wondering if you check out my story..."Give My Virginity Back" Just uploaded it...9 Chapters...
          Comment, Vote and Become Fan if you love it...
          YuLoveMeOnly
          Thushara
          ps. if you want me to read something of yours..please tell me...because i love requests and try to get to everyone....

hey thanks for becoming my fan
          just so you know all comments are welcome.
          thanks again 
          bye!