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Hope you'll enjoy my story "JUST BREATHE VOLUME 3" as part of the JUST BREATHE ANTHOLOGY SERIES poetry collection 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/368528491?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Aang151Rron

hiii! if u don't remember, u asked me to read ur book and this is the feedback i have for you!
          
          the book is amazing but make sure grammer, spelling, and capitalization is correct! don't make the paragraphs too long because people could get bored. have it so there are 2-3 sentences in one paragraph. make sure the sentences aren't run-on and too long! ❤️
          
          the book is amazing, these are just small mistakes i caught.
          
          xx sameeha 

Hi, I reached 110K but I'm growing slowly on followers. Could you follow me, please? If you do, you can advertise your story on my board and I won't delete it.
          Also, if you give a star to all my 54 parts, I will add your story to my public reading list.