Sereneflow

Hey hi!! I am a new writer, writing my first story. Can you please read and comment on it so that helps me gain some review. It would be a great help if you give me some insights. If you are into mystery and romance please give it a try.
          
          Aditya and Tanisha find themselves meeting again and again despite wanting nothing more than staying away from each other. Aditya is a special crime branch head chasing a crime while Tanisha is a school teacher running away from a secret.
          Circumstances lead them to meet each other for a small time forming a truce only to get seperated again.
          But this time, Aditya decides to marry her. What made him take that decision? And how is she going to react to it? 
          What happened to the case he is solving?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/390516339

Apeace_18

Hey there 
          Can I ask you something?

Apeace_18

@vanessaiwannago 
            If you don't mind can I suggest you my stories?
            There are three of them actually two of them,
            
            One is a short story story of just 5000 words named Fleeting Glances, a quick cute read that maybe could melt your heart 
            And yes, it's completed.
            
            Another one is Mending Secrets, its the first book of the Mending series. If you decide come accross the pages of Mending Secrets you'll dive into the web of secrets – of past hearts and second chance, mending everything all together.
            (It rhyme so well isn't it?)
            And it has some flirty moments tooo.
            
            The third one it's not actually a book, it's my rant book (if that what it's called) where I share my opinions over books and my dramatic thoughts over life, maybe you could resonate with them.
            
            So which one should I suggest you, if you want a suggestion.
            
            ( Deep down Manifesting you will give my books a chance.)
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vanessaiwannago

@Apeace_18 heya!!  Yes sure
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_onthecloudsx_

Sorry for the surprise pop-up!
          If you’very got a moment to spare why not check out my book "Crimson Cconnections" ? Where Advik, a CBI officer and Saanjh, archeologist team up to solve a series of murder mystery.
          
          Ps: Rapunzel is mood T_T
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/361947808-crimson-connections?_gl=1*1rntsz3*_ga*YW1wLVBwaERZZ29ST0NqWkFsQWliMnRSYnM1VDg0bUJXYzZ0VHZ2MTJ6WVQ4ZE5IdU5ZV1hrUkI3dmJaYXBlN0YybHE.*_ga_KJY7GCRVB0*MTczMjU5MDA2NS4xLjAuMTczMjU5MDA2Ni4wLjAuMA..

Writix22

Hey! I apologise if I am bothering you by posting on your mb.
          
          I just would like to let you know about my completed contemporary Romance Quarter Life Crisis. 
          If you are interested in some soft romance with some humorous banter, may I suggest you to please give it a try. 
          
          I will drop a link below and hope the blurb and cover piques your interest. https://www.wattpad.com/story/356800072-quarter-life-crisis

holyypepperoni

Hi there!
          
          I came across your account in a comment section and thought I'd reach out. I’m a new writer, and I’d be incredibly grateful if you could check out my book, Bonds Beyond Business. 
          
          It's a Marriage of convenience story with a slight detour from usual conventional  stories in that genre. Every read, vote, and comment means the world to me as I continue to grow as a writer.
          
          If you have some time to spare, please give it a chance—I’d love to know your thoughts!
          
          Thank you so much!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/377405019-bonds-beyond-business