van sylvia

I love writing since I was a child and my first story I wrote was a mother's love and here I am this is my first story online and it's a mature I don't believe myself that I wrote something like this 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/364719928

I would like to get advice this is my first but am working on many including , the son, married to the twins, the identical sisters, special man, alone with them etc
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/364719928

I also want to write a book about a young woman and a stranger but what should I do? I need help my email is ttebajjukira@gmail.com. tnx