varashusreader

all ongoing stories have been updated with a new chapter

lizie005

Hey there!
          I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, and I must say—it was absolutely captivating. The imagery you painted made it so easy to envision each scene unfolding like a film in my mind.
          
          As a commissioned artist, I couldn’t help but imagine how beautifully this story could translate into a comic. Your characters, dialogue, and world-building have so much visual potential.
          
          If the idea excites you as much as it does me, I’d love to connect and possibly collaborate. Feel free to reach out on Discord at elvia.01, where I can also share my portfolio and other socials.
          
          Looking forward to the possibility of working together!
          
          Best regards,
          Elvia

lizie005

Oh I didn't receive a notification of your message or an invite on discord. Can you maybe send it  to me again?
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varashusreader

@lizie005 guess not then invitation sits unanswered
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varashusreader

@lizie005 Эльвира, равжи исеме астында дискотека чакыруы җибәрде
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Saint_Fodder

hi there I was kindly asking if you could read my book 'The Power Concept' I would appreciate it if you could also leave a review and give me feedback on the story progression from chapters 1 -12. PLEASE I want to get better at writing

varashusreader

@Saint_Fodder I think the story is well written and the progression through the first 12 chapters is prefect leaving us readers on a rollercoaster ride of all emotion possible, I had thought right away Mai's Brother was the culprit but the twist of the DNA evidence had changed my mind. It did not occur that Tenji was compelled to cooperate. very clever cant wait to sink my teeth in the next part.
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varashusreader

and do the same
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varashusreader

@Saint_Fodder  be happy to as long as you take a look over what I have gotten so far in mine
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