varashusreader

How about that I found old notebooks with more stories I wrote, now the tedious typing to bring them to you.

Saint_Fodder

hi there I was kindly asking if you could read my book 'The Power Concept' I would appreciate it if you could also leave a review and give me feedback on the story progression from chapters 1 -12. PLEASE I want to get better at writing

varashusreader

@Saint_Fodder I think the story is well written and the progression through the first 12 chapters is prefect leaving us readers on a rollercoaster ride of all emotion possible, I had thought right away Mai's Brother was the culprit but the twist of the DNA evidence had changed my mind. It did not occur that Tenji was compelled to cooperate. very clever cant wait to sink my teeth in the next part.
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varashusreader

and do the same
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varashusreader

@Saint_Fodder  be happy to as long as you take a look over what I have gotten so far in mine
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