vddefg

Yall do realise i will adopt or re write a book if yall ask

harrypotter19901

I have a dark harry fanfiction story for you to write

harrypotter19901

@vddefg Harry is the son of the dark Lord and Harry is bisexual in love with Hermione pansy draco and blasie harry wants to take over the dark dynasty after his dad
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vddefg

@harrypotter19901  Well I'm very sorry for sleeping for a while but tell me more.
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UNKNOWNONESTUDIO

Can you please read my book.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/394167709?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=UNKNOWNONESTUDIO

vddefg

@UNKNOWNONESTUDIO The writing is good, but it needs more world-building. Flesh out the fights more; the goblin fight needs more combat moves. After introducing the tyrant, provide a backstory. Also, add more world-building details, as the world feels generic. Consider including a beginning chapter summarizing the world. Create new creatures, and use
             names like "Vredesmerth," which is simply a combination of "evil," "suffering," "pain," and "fire" in Norse.
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