vegito1308

OOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHH MY GOD-!!!
          	
          	WE'VE REACHED 500-!!! THANKS A LOT VIEWERS-!!! EXPECT AN EXTRA CHAPTER FOR OP-!

AzuraDLuffy9999

can i get your opinion on my luffy in dc fanfiction

vegito1308

@AzuraDLuffy9999 Yooooooo... Your fanfic hit me with nostalgia so bad that deadass an ad scared me cuz the JL theme played and I was like "Am I thinking of the theme or is it playing...???" LMAO! Anyways, great story! I see you incorporated some iseikai stuff, added a sad background story, and created your own version of Luffy which I like! I may not like the swordsman approach much but I can understand that after Zoro dying, Luffy would make up swordsmanship. My mind's a bit rusty considering DC animated series but if I recall well, isn't the plot of your fanfic revolving around the first episodes? I like that very much! Just you know fix basic things like grammar and take your story slow... And it should be good to go! (⁠✷⁠‿⁠✷⁠)
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vegito1308

@AzuraDLuffy9999 sure-! Just give me some time to read after... I do some stuff. I'll reply soon enough.
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jjohn545

Helo my friend I just read a litte bit of your mha book and i was wondering if i could get soem advice?

jjohn545

@vegito1308 Gotcha I feel like some of his powers would be city scale to planet scale. The planet scale is when he transform earth into a living hell
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vegito1308

@jjohn545 The limit should be... Don't make a Rimuru from Tensei Shitara or Like Zeno from DBS. Universal and Multiversal feats shouldn't come easy, put heavy limitations and build up for those types of powers/abilities
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jjohn545

@vegito1308 Gotcha. Quick question since I'm using other universes and my OC is extremely powerful how much would you say is to op?
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DarkDiamond2044

You vegito there's need guidelines that will affect stories with violence I recommend to back up your stories so you don't lose them

xSanz3519

@DarkDiamond2044 you just said what im going tell awesome!
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vegito1308

@DarkDiamond2044 hey thanks-! I sincerely don't think it will affect me but I have already backed up my stories so I have a hard copy. Hopefully nothing happens but if it does, I am ready! 
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