@AzuraDLuffy9999 Yooooooo... Your fanfic hit me with nostalgia so bad that deadass an ad scared me cuz the JL theme played and I was like "Am I thinking of the theme or is it playing...???" LMAO! Anyways, great story! I see you incorporated some iseikai stuff, added a sad background story, and created your own version of Luffy which I like! I may not like the swordsman approach much but I can understand that after Zoro dying, Luffy would make up swordsmanship. My mind's a bit rusty considering DC animated series but if I recall well, isn't the plot of your fanfic revolving around the first episodes? I like that very much! Just you know fix basic things like grammar and take your story slow... And it should be good to go! (✷‿✷)