veloraix

100 Views! Aethelgard is rising. Thank you for entering the Obsidian Ribs with me.

lilyyyyyyxwriter

Hiwe girlie are you up for v4v and r4r?

lilyyyyyyxwriter

Doneee from my sidee!
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lilyyyyyyxwriter

Okieee suree!!
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veloraix

@lilyyyyyyxwriter i agree only for v4v as i don't have time now for r4r
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Staryyy2010

Yo, thanks for the follow! Good luck on your book writing, I'm in the same path. :D

veloraix

@Staryyy2010 thank you.. I will try to correct it 
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Staryyy2010

@veloraix Will for sure! Did already check out the first two, and here's my first tip: double tap enter for a one bar space between paragraphs, so ppl can comment on specific events IN the book and its more restful for the eyes.
            
            No offense, but it looks kinda squished together- xD
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veloraix

@Staryyy2010 if you like dark fantasy, you can check out my book. I have posted 4 chapters and am still learning to write better. Your feedback will really mean a lot 
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