yourcozycounter
Thankyou dear for adding my story to your reading list. Grateful!! Lovelove!
Moon_orchid_333
@veronicavilly "Thank you so much for the kind words! I’m really glad you enjoyed the pacing and the character interactions. I appreciate the tip about the introduction—I’ll definitely keep that in mind for future chapters to keep the mystery alive. Hope you enjoy my other stories too!"
Moon_orchid_333
Hey
Sorry to bother you , if you have time please read my story and tell me about your thoughts
https://www.wattpad.com/story/409982656?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Moon_orchid_333
veronicavilly
@Moon_orchid_333 oh I read it, and what a beautiful chaotic love story it is, I guess you are going for a Short version as per the pacing, if yes then it's really very good. I love how you kept one topic for one chapter,love how you have written the interaction and plot. What I can say story wise it's all good, I first went through the introduction because that's what all readers do.."Keep it minimum" the introduction can be kept minimum just put some" hook line and sinker" lines, cause sometimes that reveals the mystery .. Over all loved it, planning to read all your other reads..
apoorva616
apoorva616
weaver_girl
Hi Dear,
Hope you are doing good, sorry for posting here, but if you enjoy reading fan fics, please give it a try to my book, I hope you like it.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/234642747?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=weaver_girl
Writer0151
Heyyy! I'd really appreciate if you look at my book 'The Story of Nisha'. THANKS