versazex

Guys I need help.
          	
          	I’ve reread the whole book and I’m so unhappy with so many plots. Like so many of them don’t make sense??? And are so frickin cringe Omds. I don’t think I’ve ever cringed so hard whilst reading the Halloween chapter like omg. This book sounds like I’ve pulling thechapters like out my ass and hoping for the best I’m not even kidding bro.
          	
          	So plsplspls tell me like what scenes u guys found cringe or don’t like so I can avoid making chapters like that

versazex

@urlocalmaincharacter thank you sososososo much!!!
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urlocalmaincharacter

@versazex hey!!! Okay so tbh its normal to feel this way about your writing but can I just say I absolutely enjoyed the book!! (Which is rare for me ).
          	  
          	  And i think you have a very intriguing plot, the relationship b/w val an her family is heartbreaking and makes you want to root for her sm! You've done a great job portraying that
          	  
          	  And personally I didn't find the Halloween chapter cringe, if I had any complaints it would be that I wanted val and zekes interaction to be longer lol >_< and i just love their interactions sm esp in the newer book where he does almost pit her against them beacuse it is realistic with how awfully  they've treated her.
          	  
          	  If anything i would just want more of her fam realizing how awful they've been to her and Val like actually standing up for herself like I couldn't wait to see her with zeke just so l could enjoy how much it would piss everyone else off 
          	  
          	  I really hope you continue it!
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versazex

@notbria thank u bubs c:
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versazex

Guys I need help.
          
          I’ve reread the whole book and I’m so unhappy with so many plots. Like so many of them don’t make sense??? And are so frickin cringe Omds. I don’t think I’ve ever cringed so hard whilst reading the Halloween chapter like omg. This book sounds like I’ve pulling thechapters like out my ass and hoping for the best I’m not even kidding bro.
          
          So plsplspls tell me like what scenes u guys found cringe or don’t like so I can avoid making chapters like that

versazex

@urlocalmaincharacter thank you sososososo much!!!
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urlocalmaincharacter

@versazex hey!!! Okay so tbh its normal to feel this way about your writing but can I just say I absolutely enjoyed the book!! (Which is rare for me ).
            
            And i think you have a very intriguing plot, the relationship b/w val an her family is heartbreaking and makes you want to root for her sm! You've done a great job portraying that
            
            And personally I didn't find the Halloween chapter cringe, if I had any complaints it would be that I wanted val and zekes interaction to be longer lol >_< and i just love their interactions sm esp in the newer book where he does almost pit her against them beacuse it is realistic with how awfully  they've treated her.
            
            If anything i would just want more of her fam realizing how awful they've been to her and Val like actually standing up for herself like I couldn't wait to see her with zeke just so l could enjoy how much it would piss everyone else off 
            
            I really hope you continue it!
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versazex

@notbria thank u bubs c:
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notbria

Hey have you decided if your gonna finish the legacy (pls say your gonna continue it):))))

versazex

For now tho I’ll continue it but be prepared for extremely slow updates
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versazex

I genuinely wish I could tell you a certain answer, but I’m literally so torn between continuing the book or leaving it behind. I want to continue it so bad bc it’s become apart of me and I would be leaving behind years of work but then again I want to give myself some peace by discontinuing it. I’ve been rereading the book and I’ve come across sooooo many cringe worthy scenes and just some ass plot lines that genuinely make me wither in pain when I think about it T^T. Butttt I might js continue the book but with slow updates. But I have been thinking about redoing the whole book which I doubt I’ll go ahead with.
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notbria

Girl have have you disappeared again come back we miss you

versazex

@notbria but the next chap should be up with week, hopefully today
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versazex

Girl I’m trying to find free time to write but bro when I say I’m busy I mean I don’t even have time to think, send help quick
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