For those who actually read my story
Well first of all thank you for it. I posted it without any major expectations, yet 500 reads are there, so thats something.
Second, i have been rereading the previous stuff and i noticed something i already partially knew. There was no single direction. I wrote was came to my head and made some sense to me, there was no specific style, no other POVs things came out of nowhere (partially cause i wanted to make a only NL POV story) and this didnt make sense and took out all enjoyable parts of the narrative.
So i am going to rewrite the story from the start, with some major and minor adjustements to hopefully make it a more engaging and enjoyable narrative.
Thanks for you understanding. Hope everything is well with you all
AVE DOMINUS NOX
The Emperor Protects