lustformore

Hello Victoria dearest. 
          Just found you. Read your short story and loved it. 
          Thank you for writing it. 
          I love short stories. And yours was really good. 
          I loved how you started it. And the little hints you gave. I loved the built up. And also the end. 
          It was just a snack you can eat between meals to help you through the day. 
          But... I think because its so short, you could put some oral in it as well. Like they are learning eachothers body. By scent, taste, sound, sight. All the senses. 
          And maybe to tie it all together, maybe the last words of the story could be: I am home, shouted words from the sister who came back.... Just a thought....
          
          I will check you out on social. See you there!

victoriaslockett

@lustformore That's actually a great suggestion. I wrote this fairly quickly, but now I'm thinking of going back and making it into a full length novel with all the goodies. Would you be interested in reading something like that?
            
            If so, please fill out this form: https://forms.gle/VSsmfX8WPoeGBnqn9
            
            I'm looking to see if there is enough interest to create this full story.
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Rose_Bud_616

Found u on tictok!! Love both of the books u posted!! Cant wait to read more!!

Rose_Bud_616

@victoriaslockett I did but then I deleted it cause I saw it in ur bio
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victoriaslockett

@Rose_Bud_616 Hey I saw you made a comment, but I can't find it, so just in case. I moved the "An Indecent Game" story to Kindle Unlimited here: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0BRX27WKC
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victoriaslockett

@Rose_Bud_616 Hello and thank you! I'm glad you're here and hope you keep enjoying the stories!
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