@vidyadharisri
Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better <3
Hello
Thank you for voting on my story The Red Saree.
I hope you like it ☺️.
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@vidyadharisri Hey there First of all Thank you so much. I am truly touch by your words. Secondly, the story is based in Gujarat and I write the language Gujarati not Bengali. Anyway noted from now onwards I would translate it English everything.
@batulyunus I like your story very much. I have been reading foreign stories this is the first time I found something Indian. So I started reading it right away! There is a little piece of suggestion I would like to give. Reduce the usage of Bengali I guess which you are using there and try to keep it completely in English. If you want to use please write translation to each and every such sentence. Although people who know Hindi could get a sense of what the sentence means which means most Indians but keeping it completely in English or line to line translation helps you get better reach mostly outside India. And thanks for bringing this story out! please update it fast. Meanwhile I am going to check out your other works :)