villaindermo290

IS IT WRONG FOR ME TO WANT AN ACTUAL PRIENCESS LOVE STORY AND NOT SLOP, IM TIRED OF DISNEYS "STRONG" WOMEN THEY ARENT STRONG THEY ARENT EVEN CHARACTERS :((( please bring back love storys you can make women strong without making her undefeatable PLEASEEE

villaindermo290

IS IT WRONG FOR ME TO WANT AN ACTUAL PRIENCESS LOVE STORY AND NOT SLOP, IM TIRED OF DISNEYS "STRONG" WOMEN THEY ARENT STRONG THEY ARENT EVEN CHARACTERS :((( please bring back love storys you can make women strong without making her undefeatable PLEASEEE

villaindermo290

honestly should i make a story and what would yall want , naruto, one piece, owl house etccc blah blah what you guys want

villaindermo290

I FORGOT PEOPLE CAN LOK AT THOSE.......
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Lunarix8

@villaindermo290 Reading list* my bad
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Lunarix8

@villaindermo290 Your pfp and previous stories give it away 
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puresoul0102

puresoul0102

@puresoul0102 I'll work on letting readers infer character traits and not repeating them directly. I'll also focus on subtlety and depth in character development to enhance the narrative.
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villaindermo290

@puresoul0102 its good but you need to let the reader infer more about your character instead of telling them out right, you also need to stop repeating her character traits and really let the book and its words speak for itself not tell your readers, its better to let them figure out pieces of the puzzle instead of giving them all the answers , but it is good keep up the good work <333
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palestinie

WAIT I SAW THE TIKTOK WHERE YOU GOT YOUR PFP FROM 

palestinie

@ Lamar_Waleed  that is for I to know and you shall find out 
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villaindermo290

@Lamar_Waleed  lmao not the poetic rizz
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