Mary

just loved ur 'location'!!!!:D

Hey guys... I've been reading over my book 'The Gown', and I really don't like it at all... I find it a bit too rushed and I don't really like my main character. So, for that reason, I'm thinking of taking it down, or majorly editing it- removing the fantasy aspect of it, and changing the character's personality a bit, with a few added changes... please tell me what you think as soon as possible. Thank you!

Mary!!!! answer your messages!
          

@jr0127 Hey! Thanks, I really tried my best to comment proper comments and criticise constructively :) 
          Oh yes, hopefully I'll read chapter 19 of The Runaways soon!

Hey there Mary! I just wanted to thank you for your fantastic comments on The Runaways! I really always am blown away when someone genuinely takes the time to read and critique The Runaways! I'm very much looking forward to getting to your story! I'm free today to start returning deals so I should be getting to your book shortly! I also wanted to let you know that I posted Chapter 19 of The Runaways today, please enjoy :) 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/10024124-the-runaways-chapter-19-new

@s4jood haha, me too! I'm at mum's work and i'm dying to squeal but it's an office and I'm so damn excited! Luv ya Saj... and your going to die when you see what I wrote about you at the end of Chapter 12 ;)

Omg i feel so excited for ya nachabee... Im jumping on my bed..... AHHHHHHH
          HEHEHEHE... i just read all ur comments and story and im sooo excited and the book isnt eeven mine cant imagin u... Live u heeps habib

@therealpaviona Oh hey :) No it's okay... I understand. Yes I totally agree with you though. I'm sick of people who bring negativity to wattpad, rather than criticising with a TINGE of kindness or even politeness. Criticising harshly? Maybe. Criticising rudely? Not on.

sorry for the first comment but actually it was not for you. my apologies :)) it was for the mean poxes, who are very shallow minded, reading stories they don't want then criticizing it. i hate those kind of people. 

@BackFromHell of course :)