AuthorGrowthByEliza
I just came across Beyond The Dreamline and the idea of Maya living between reality and something else honestly stuck with me more than I expected. The way you described her being haunted by dreams and illusions already feels intense and unsettling in a really good way.
It gave me that feeling of “something is not quite right here”… and now I really want to understand what’s happening to her. I’m glad I found it early
violentpeace02
Honestly, it started as an idea, but Maya’s story kind of grew on its own as I kept writing. I knew I wanted that uneasy feeling, but the intensity… it surprised me too. I’m really glad you’re feeling it the way I imagined.I’ll be updating regularly, so stay tuned. Things are only going to get more intense from here.”
AuthorGrowthByEliza
Hey, I came back to read a bit more and I can really feel the intensity building around Maya now… it’s starting to feel even more unsettling in a good way.
I’m really curious, when you were writing her, did you always plan for things to get this intense, or did it just evolve as you went?
AuthorGrowthByEliza
That actually makes me even more curious now… the way you’re building that sense of unease around Maya is really effective.
It feels like the kind of story where you can’t tell what’s real and what isn’t anymore, and that’s exactly what makes it stick. I’m definitely going to keep reading