hank1938

I will, when are you going to give us more.  You could write more than that in an email too me.  You start and I'll respond maybe you could refine and put it in a story.

virgomars

okay sure, i'd love to see what your opinions are on my work :)
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hank1938

In (Cold Thighs) what I read was the girl taking a pee with explanation of that and concluded with the rough to we'll used to dry.  I like water sports but this ended far to quickly.

virgomars

sorry about that! as i said before, i will try to make my chapters longer. i hope you'll stay to read more :)
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hank1938

Are your stories completed, or just a short paragraph and that is all?

virgomars

The chapter I'm writing right now will be quite long. I've had a thought about it too and I'm going to try and make longer chapters. :)
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hank1938

@hank1938 yes that's OK, but it seems that I can only read a couple paragraphs.
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virgomars

all of my chapters will be short on "Risqué". I am currently writing the next one :)
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ANAKHAJUBY

hi
          how r u mate

hank1938

@ANAKHAJUBY now that was hot, so hot.
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virgomars

@ANAKHAJUBY I don't know but you can still read my current story! ;)
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ANAKHAJUBY

Why do you start an amazing story but you never finish it?
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