Sorry for the late reply! I didn't get notified of urs. If u add my id to future ones (@seema_ahmad), I will :-).
Absolutely no offence taken :-)! Is it chapter 6 that u're referring to - CAMP SET-UP? There r actually no other chapters that contain quite as much detail as that one! In my final edit, once I finish a 1st draft, I will modify that chapter, i.e. reduce the details & add humour :-)!
Can I request a huge favour ;-)? Pls read the next chapter - 7, LAKESIDE ENCOUNTER - before abandoning the novel :-). Thx!