vividlyvivi

Guys my book's highkey looking like a mess right now with all the editing im doing. As of today i think im done with 14 / 50 chapters, these fourteen being the final drafts that actually make it into the manuscript word for word. So basically what im trying to say is, for those of you reading my book currently , any chapters after the fourteenth one (The Syntax of a Life) might have:- a slightly different writing style, imperfect grammar or improper use of em dashes and semi colons and stuff  </3, plot flow and function lol. So i was thinking if it would be better If I were to just unpublish my book until im done with editing all 50 chapters. Or do i just Let it be and let y'alls suffer LMAO HELP WHAT DO Y'ALLS THINK I SHOULD DO

lazybum4u

@vividlyvivi whatt no don't unpublish omg it's okay babe , tbf your chapters dont even seem like they lack editing or anything major so don't stress just do your thingg <33
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sxrpxnt23

@vividlyvivi no please don't unpublish! take your time editing it's not going to be a problem dww
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lazybum4u

@vividlyvivi Maeve...i finished The Final Breath a while ago and oh my god i need to talk about it. Like HOLY this is insane work i love you and i love the final breath how did you come up with a book so good what the heck bro i dont think im ever getting over this masterpiece.  Im satisfied but heartbroken all at the same time :(((

vividlyvivi

@lazybum4u this is like the best compliment ever like get out omg
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lazybum4u

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ALSO I 1000% MEANT THE LEGENDARY LOVERS COMMENT BECAUSE OH MY FUCK
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lazybum4u

but omg SUCH A GOOD BOOK IDK IF I WANT MORE HELP IM SCARED
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vividlyvivi

Guys my book's highkey looking like a mess right now with all the editing im doing. As of today i think im done with 14 / 50 chapters, these fourteen being the final drafts that actually make it into the manuscript word for word. So basically what im trying to say is, for those of you reading my book currently , any chapters after the fourteenth one (The Syntax of a Life) might have:- a slightly different writing style, imperfect grammar or improper use of em dashes and semi colons and stuff  </3, plot flow and function lol. So i was thinking if it would be better If I were to just unpublish my book until im done with editing all 50 chapters. Or do i just Let it be and let y'alls suffer LMAO HELP WHAT DO Y'ALLS THINK I SHOULD DO

lazybum4u

@vividlyvivi whatt no don't unpublish omg it's okay babe , tbf your chapters dont even seem like they lack editing or anything major so don't stress just do your thingg <33
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sxrpxnt23

@vividlyvivi no please don't unpublish! take your time editing it's not going to be a problem dww
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sxrpxnt23

@vividlyvivi OMG YES IT IS A RIVERDALE THING NO WAY YOU LIKE RD TOO

sxrpxnt23

lol SAMEE i watched until season 5 though js because rd fell off. Like they lost the plot completely :<
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vividlyvivi

@sxrpxnt23 i used to be obsessed during the pandemic lmao, i didnt watch anything after season 4  tho
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NaanaCutie1998

Your story is sooo good.. I’m not done yet but I’m hooked. I can’t wait to read more of your stories 

vividlyvivi

@NaanaCutie1998 thank you so much! Keep me updated i'd love to know what you think about it while you're reading hsahs <3
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lazybum4u

Mae is it just me or are some of the comments from your chapters disappearing? i was re reading the earlier chapters and noticed some of my comments had vanished :((

lazybum4u

@vividlyvivi OFCC BAE THEY'RE GENUINELY SO GOOD
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lazybum4u

@vividlyvivi oh okayy that makes so much more sense now
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vividlyvivi

@lazybum4u also u re-reading my chapters makes me so happy sjsjshhs
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sxrpxnt23

hi omg i just got done with chapter 23 and its the bomb. like wow all they did was kiss and i feel like i just read and interrupted some sacred moment between two people who are literally perfect for each other. I love your writing style so much Maeve. I think it's safe to say you're my new favorite author now. Please don't stop writing, this book is way too good and you deserve such a larger audience it's insane!! much love <33

vividlyvivi

@sxrpxnt23 also also quick question regarding ur user, is it a Riverdale reference or js random 
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vividlyvivi

And ur one of my fav readers, I love youu ❣️
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vividlyvivi

I can't believe I'm saying this, but The Final Breath is officially all done! All 50 chapters, the prologues, and the epilogue have been published. Writing my first book has been such an incredible experience. While the hardest part is definitely ahead of me( tackling the massive editing process on the draft)I am so incredibly proud of this story. I can't wait to jump back in and polish it to perfection, but first I just wanted to pause and thank you all for reading <3
          I can't wait to see your reactions to the finale—please vote, comment, and let me know what you think!

lazybum4u

@sxrpxnt23 dww im not giving you any spoilers twin
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vividlyvivi

@sxrpxnt23 LMFOAOSA STOP THANK YOUU
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lazybum4u

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Maeve what the heck babe I just finished chapter 46 and oh my god. Idw leave any spoilers here but holy shit. COUNT YOUR DAYS. Im sobbing omg , i had to stare at my wall in silence after i was done with it (DIDNT MAKE ME FEEL ANY BETTER)

lazybum4u

@vividlyvivi NO YOU DID MY JELENA DIRTY
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lazybum4u

@vividlyvivi i didnt realise how many comments i spammed lol
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sxrpxnt23

hiii i started your book a few days ago, but i haven't really interacted much because I was a bit hesitant to since there were almost no comments before lmao. But your chapters so far are very well written and i would love to read more of the book. The dynamic between the characters is very interesting and honestly i cannot wait to see what happens further in the book. Im still on chapter 12 so i have no idea what this apparent plot twist is but im very excited to read on. Keep up the good work I can tell this book is going to be great, and i will for sure interact more!

vividlyvivi

@sxrpxnt23  Hihi aww that's okay nws i get that, i dont usually comment on other people's work  either unless i see a few others too. But i do hope you'll comment maybe in the future!  I love seeing readers much like yourself interact with my book, it always motivates me, so tysmm & keep me updated❣️❣️
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