viviloves2write

Chapters 1 and 2, rewritten and up!

viviloves2write

For anyone who reads or has read My Best Friend is A What????, I have begun rewriting it in a third person point of view! Right now just chapter 2 is up (I replaced the original) but I will work on Chapter One and replace each chapter as I go!

FireyCool

thaks for following me ^-^

viviloves2write

@FireyCool its ok i figured my message wasn't sent the right way.  but it actually doesn't have a name yet.  im still trying to think of one. but i think the first 2 chapters are up. it's just called story for now.
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FireyCool

@viviloves2write  sorry for then late reply. there just were some problems in my net connection :)
                   of course I would read it. :) what's the title of the story ???
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viviloves2write

no problem :) Also I have this story that I have been working on, would you be interested if i posted it up?
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FireyCool

i love ur story 'my best friend is a what????'. its just amazing!
          are you planing on making a sequel ? i'd love to read what happens next in Addi's life.

viviloves2write

@FireyCool that is actually a great suggestion!  you're right i did notice that he was like so absent at the time she discovered Colton.  i even felt bad for him lol. but i will definitely fix that.  i am always looking for tips and suggestions to improve.
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FireyCool

@viviloves2write  then it would be good if you show her a little bit closer to Eli. when Colten shows up, its like Eli dosent even exists for some time. she totally forgets about him. 
            just a suggetion you know. i enjoyed reading every part though
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viviloves2write

@FireyCool no the story basics will stay the same but i want to add more and get into more details and such with the characters.  :)
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