Hi!
I finished reading your book, "Babysitting the Bad Boy's Family". It was an amazing ride, I enjoyed Ethan and Kelsey's dynamic and her with Noah bit. The story propels a sense of movement toward the journey of the main character and the side characters. The banter between Noah & Kelsey was organic as the chemistry developed naturally it felt so real and not so fake & rushed. The comedy was funny & cheesy it made me laugh so much I couldn't control myself, thank you! How you execute the concept of the babysitting was well done almost reminds me of Jesse from the Disney show, but what is so different is that there is a linear story and a consistent of character growth and there are mature scenes & talks than just pure childish.
However, for Ethan I wish there had been more growth and made him learn from his mistakes by himself than someone telling him. it takes away character growth & lessens that character. Moreso, I wish there more drama between Kelsey and Ethan I did enjoy the fluff but I wish there was angst and they try to resolve their issue on their own rather than having a third person doing it. It takes away the intensity of the story & lessens the audience's excitement as they know someone will fix the relationship. Noah is a great side character, but I feel like he overstates his welcome as being a wise man giving the right answers. I want to how events like the "breakup" scene (in Ethan's house) & the beach scene will play out without Noah's involvement.
