duckie_da_duck
Can you send me the discord link again? Sorry if this is annoying.
vo1ce_
vo1ce_
Hey chat so I’ve been sick for a few days so Ep 8 hasn’t gotten much progress, I’m up to the “Hello, Uzi. Hi N!” Part though…… we’ll see how long it takes to come out i guess >:3
Shirleyis_okay
@vo1ce_ it’s October my dearest Parental figure. I’m waiting for your arrival >:) (Take your time!)
xXAng3lDu5tXx
MAY I HAVE THE LINK TO UR DISCORD SERVER PLSPLSPLS?
vo1ce_
YES OFC BBG
https://discord.gg/6s2aWY4V
JUST DON’T MIND THE AMOUNT OF MURDER DRONES YOUTUBERS THERE
Neodragon33
How many parts you think your version of Absolute end’s going to be, 3-4 parts?
vo1ce_
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But that probably won’t happen given I’m 3K words in and just finished that sappy space scene, about to fINALLY WRITE J AS A GODDAMN CHARACTER HOLY FUCK
vo1ce_
Well at first I thought it would be 3 parts since it’s the finale, but seeing as it’s 20 minutes and mainly combat, it’s 90% going to be one part. If it ends up I’m taking so long on the chapter where I’m scared people wont read it cause it came out so late, like Mass Destruction, I’ll make it a two-parter
Neodragon33
You had the opportunity to experience the finale yourself yet?
Camzy2004
I made some chapters of murder drones myself
LixzyX0X0
Hi I’m a big fan of your murder drones book so I wrote a murder drones book that was inspired after yours but it only has one chapter -_-
vo1ce_
Ok cool! So I read a little bit of the book, and the first thing I noticed was the opening to your first chapter was suuuper similar to something I wrote maybe a year ago. I get taking inspiration, but there’s differences in copying and inspo
Anyway, generally, your writing could be improved by using a lot more descriptive language. A lot of the actions in your story are left up to the reader to decide, and while that is good in some circumstances, there should be a little more for your reader to lean on. You can trust your readers to think for themselves, but you still have to give them something lol
That’s mainly it :3
vo1ce_
Omgggggg??? Pookie you’re doing really well with the oneshots you have written so far, but do you take any constructive criticism? :3
BrianGeller
I have a request can you do a uzi brother malereader x cyn oneshot? If not I understand you probably are busy with other things but I hope to see more n brother malereader x cyn and uzi in the future have a wonderful summer.
vo1ce_
Hey! My requests are currently closed, but I should be getting back to posting oneshots once I finish up with the rewrite of Pilot — Part 2. I hope you have a nice summer, too!
duckie_da_duck
VOICE YOU SAID SOMETHING ON THE DISCORD ABOUT THE WATTPAD CREATOR PROGRAM?!?!
vo1ce_
They invited me to it—But in general its a huge scam imo. I can’t say much so im shutting up abt it.
vo1ce_
Yall I literally hate that they took away direct messages, sucks actual ass. Anyway, I think my account is a safe enough place to send the link, so to any of my followers who haven’t joined my discord yet, hop on in!
https://discord.gg/Zd6WT7Mf
There is a waiting room, but usually me or the one admin in the server get to adding perms quickly.
The anniversary for the server was actually just yesterday (or two days ago, since its almost midnight for me), but it was officially opened on the 13th, so maybe I’ll draw a new server icon and/or write a bit in VC on the 13th. Thankfully im on summer break.