@vo1ce_
So on your oneshots we gonna get the continuation of the brother of n malereader x uzi and cyn you got the pilot and heartbeat but maybe making it it's own story might be a good idea.
Eventually I might end up writing more of that, but it’s hard to write or do much creatively outside of drawing and music.
Thanks for enjoying my stories!
Stay gold
HEY CHAT!!!!
Im still working on episode 8, but one of my friends recently joined Wattpad and put his own fic on here, so GO READ DJ THE FINDER!!!! It’s in my “made by my friends” reading list, and follow him too or i will cry
Stay gold
Can you send me the discord link again? Sorry if this is annoying.
Hey chat so I’ve been sick for a few days so Ep 8 hasn’t gotten much progress, I’m up to the “Hello, Uzi. Hi N!” Part though…… we’ll see how long it takes to come out i guess >:3
@vo1ce_ it’s October my dearest Parental figure. I’m waiting for your arrival >:) (Take your time!)
MAY I HAVE THE LINK TO UR DISCORD SERVER PLSPLSPLS?
YES OFC BBG
https://discord.gg/6s2aWY4V
JUST DON’T MIND THE AMOUNT OF MURDER DRONES YOUTUBERS THERE
How many parts you think your version of Absolute end’s going to be, 3-4 parts?
But that probably won’t happen given I’m 3K words in and just finished that sappy space scene, about to fINALLY WRITE J AS A GODDAMN CHARACTER HOLY FUCK
Well at first I thought it would be 3 parts since it’s the finale, but seeing as it’s 20 minutes and mainly combat, it’s 90% going to be one part. If it ends up I’m taking so long on the chapter where I’m scared people wont read it cause it came out so late, like Mass Destruction, I’ll make it a two-parter
You had the opportunity to experience the finale yourself yet?
I made some chapters of murder drones myself
Hi I’m a big fan of your murder drones book so I wrote a murder drones book that was inspired after yours but it only has one chapter -_-
Ok cool! So I read a little bit of the book, and the first thing I noticed was the opening to your first chapter was suuuper similar to something I wrote maybe a year ago. I get taking inspiration, but there’s differences in copying and inspo
Anyway, generally, your writing could be improved by using a lot more descriptive language. A lot of the actions in your story are left up to the reader to decide, and while that is good in some circumstances, there should be a little more for your reader to lean on. You can trust your readers to think for themselves, but you still have to give them something lol
That’s mainly it :3
Omgggggg??? Pookie you’re doing really well with the oneshots you have written so far, but do you take any constructive criticism? :3
I have a request can you do a uzi brother malereader x cyn oneshot? If not I understand you probably are busy with other things but I hope to see more n brother malereader x cyn and uzi in the future have a wonderful summer.
Hey! My requests are currently closed, but I should be getting back to posting oneshots once I finish up with the rewrite of Pilot — Part 2. I hope you have a nice summer, too!
