vouvezsoir

Just updated Jiraiya's Book of Pick-Up Lines! After approximately 1/5 of my life hahaha. This is my first time logging on in YEARS

vouvezsoir

Bloodline has become a hazard. I fear that a reader might fall into one of its abundant plot holes and never escape, and so I'll be taking it down temporarily to do some major editing on it and refine my ideas for the plot. Expect it to be back up in a month, at the most.
          
          Sorry to all who would have wanted to read it between now and that time!

vouvezsoir

Would anyone mind reading what I have so far for Bloodline with constructive criticism? Something about it seems off to me.

vouvezsoir

@TridentOfSexiness I was actually talking about the chapter I'm in the process of writing at the moment. But that would be awesome, too!
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madaratiddy

I wouldn't mind; I was planning on reading it again, anyway. From the beginning, right? :D
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vouvezsoir

Just completely finished editing Bloodline. You guys probably won't notice anything, but it feels like a monkey's been thrown off my back (figuratively, of course). Soo I'm working on the next chapter atm, and after it's done, I'll get to working on "Jiraiya's Book...".
          
          Thanks for reading!