@Taktikou Hello!! For a first fanfic it is extraordinary! Though I will slightly see Thorin's pov a bit grimmer and morally greyish, just a bit. You're doing good til now. Its characters are diffrent from the ones I see in 'the Hobbit' fanfics and I adore that + you have nothing to thank me for, I'm just appreciating good work. <3 And don't be discouraged by an average number of reads/votes, lotr is kind of a small, slowly diminishing fandom, especially concerning 'the Hobbit', I can only be happy to see people attempting to keep it alive