waffles0o

Hey, finally getting back to you. Haven’t been on for a few years. Anyways, your story is interesting and unique but kind of hard to follow in my opinion. You mix elements of different genres like fnaf and undertale and I think that it is a intuitive and great idea, but I sometimes get confused on the type of writing it is. At first it was somewhat suspenseful until it turned into an rpg somewhat. But overall it’s a good story so far. I’ll continue reading and let you know what I think later. I’m not the best critique but I hope this helped. Have a good night.

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