hjyi04

Hi! I have particular R4R style but it's totally up to you because I'm not sure how well received my comments would be. I kind of list my comments throughout the chapter with both critiques (but you can definitely take it however you will because it's your story) and compliments. If you don't want the critique's then you can let me know and I'll delete them. Thanks!

waifuv

Of course, I’m always down for R4R!! I would greatly appreciate any critiques you have! 
            
            I had to cut out a lot of the book due to the word limit, so I know it’s very rushed, but I’d like as much feedback as possible so I can make an extended version! :)) I’m going to start reading your book
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