The_Pirate_Pen

The ride home was as lively as our town's graveyard. I was glued to the door the entire time, ready to jump out the minute we got to my house or just in case he decided to bring up what Dream Hero had had no problem discussing. I clutched the door handle like it was a lifeline and prayed it wouldn't result in me jumping out of a moving car.
          
          Hero didn't seem to notice. 
          
          It was clear that his mind was somewhere else. He didn't try to talk to me like he had done back in class which was good because all that I could think about was the fact that he had friendzoned me and that he had gotten Melissa's name wrong.
          
          I wanted to correct him so bad that I just—
          
          "It's Melissa." I blurted out the minute I got out of the car. "The girl Donovan's with, her name is Melissa. Not Melinda."
          
          "Okay? Potato Tomato." was his response. He looked at my hand that was still clutching the car door before looking back at me. "Can I go now?"
          
          "It's actually," I chuckled nervously, letting go of the door. "It's, um, tomato—Potato Potato and Tomato Tomato but I get your confusion—"
          
          "Harley."
          
          "Hm?"
          
          "Close the door." He muttered and I scrambled to do just that before rushing to get inside so that I could scream into my pillow at how ridiculous I had just been."Harley." He called out once more and I screeched to a halt like an unoiled robot, waiting for him to speak.
          
          "Check your messages once in a while." He mumbled. "Otherwise exchanging numbers would be pointless, wouldn't it?"
          
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maxouCHOCOLAT03

Salut ! Aujourd'hui, je viens faire un peu de pub à mon roman ( je sais que pour certains, ce genre de message énerve et si c'est ton cas, je m'en excuse) 
          
          Il s'appelle Thanàsima, 35 chapitres sont postés. Bien qu'il contienne quelques incohérences dans le début (et sans doute dans la suite, bien que je ne le sache pas) qui ne sont pas majeures, j'espère avoir réussi à construire une histoire avec une bonne trame, des personnages attachants et pas trop prévisible. 
          
          Si tu décides d'aller voir, sache aussi que mon style d'écriture se développe au fil des chapitres et je pense m'être améliorée depuis le début ce pourquoi il ne faudrait pas que tu me juge dès le premier chapitre qui est de mon point de vue écrit d'une façon assez... enfantine dirons nous. 
          
          En espérant t'y voir,
          byzzz
          
          ps: j'aime beaucoup ta présentation