bumblebee0205

Hey honey, pls take a look at my book if you have the time. It's called "Unwanted Desires". I could use some feedback. Thank you :)

wallflowermadness

Hi, I've just read it. Brilliant work, really really good. Great storyline. I would just say to make sure your story doesn't follow the typical storyline, so she shouldn't give in to him straight away. Really good so far. However, I would get a profile picture as it makes you seem more real, even if it's a cartoon or something☺️
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