wandergiiirl

Hello!!
          	
          	RED's Chapter XLIII is up!
          	https://www.wattpad.com/1646242609-traffic-lights-red-xliii

rtchmrl

hi wandergiiirl!
          
          i've been binge-reading your works earlier this week! the first one i read was Traffic Lights: Red, which i thought was already completed. since nabitin ako, i looked into your profile and read Traffic Lights: Green, recently finished Traffic Lights: Yellow, and am currently reading The Hushed Nightingale!
          
          all i can say is that your word choice is mature and truly reflects the characters' personalities and wisdom. i love your writing style because of how you broaden the POV's perspective with detail and clarity (which widens my vocabulary!). what also amazes me is how you include real-life situations, which i consider a rare gem.
          
          i am so happy that i came across your profile and got to know your art! continue learning, unlearning, and relearning. don't get discouraged by people's negative opinions; instead, take them lightly and reflect on how to grow and evolve into the best version of yourself.
          
          i know you deserve the best in life.
          
          have a great day ahead!

wandergiiirl

@rtchmrl hello!!! omggg! if only I could heart messages here. hehe. maraming salamat po! beke nemen pwede na ring makisuyo na i-chika mo sa frennies mo ang books ko. <3
            
            your msg means a lot to me. thank you nang marami! have a great day, too!
            
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aeriselll

Hi, wandergiiirl! Medyo naging abala ako these past few weeks because of schoolwork, kaya naman here's my quick overall review from what I have already read.
          
          For me, your writing style is very detailed throughout the chapters, which I enjoyed since it's now difficult to find such a level of narrative writing. Your grammar was also good because the word placement was correct. My only concern is that sobrang mahaba yung mga inner monologue kaysa sa mga palitan ng words kasi personally mas prefer ko yung maraming conversations pero para sa akin lang naman iyon. Overall, I like the pacing of events; hindi siya masyado minamadali. I also love how you give each character a chance to show their personality, kung saan yun ang hinahanap ko sa mga story na binabasa ko. That’s all of my comments as of now. Hindi ko pa alam kung kailan ko ulit mababasa ang RED, and I hope kapag nagbalik ako sa pagbabasa, tapos na siya hehe. Have a great day po!

wandergiiirl

@aeriselll Hello! First off, thanks a lot for the review! Well noted ang suggestion mo. I'm sorry, too, if it is taking me a while to finish reading your book and give you a review of it. Tinatapos ko kasi ang pending chapters ko sa RED, but I'll make sure to get back to you soon.
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