wanderingace

Status Update: the rewriting process has restarted as I didn't feel satisfied with the plot, mainly because I want to make it stand alone without much effort, but have prequels and sequels.
          	Also you may have noticed the very rough draft has been removed. Well that is because I unpunished it for several reasons. 
          	1. People kept commenting on comparison to the Rainimator series this was an AU branch of. Since I am good friends with a lore expert, I am now fully aware of these fallacies. 
          	2. I thought perhaps withholding the original draft can help generate demand for the rewritten version.
          	3. I intend to post a teaser of the story when I am fully able to publish it without error, rather than post it with the original draft.
          	
          	On final note, the canonicity of my first draft is ultimately what pushed me to pull back said draft. Please respect this decision I have made.
          	
          	Thanks,
          	
          	WanderingAce.

Deawsomepizza

@wanderingace Alright then, like I said, good luck!
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wanderingace

@Deawsomepizza yee honestly that was the idea. I wanted to do better interactions and backstory. And I did definitely desire to have better themes and arcs that definitely would aid in giving it a better sense of identity compared to Rainimator.
          	  Funny thing... in my second rewrite (one I didn't show here), I didn't make Neaus all that threatening. He was just there, and disappeared after being defeated. So I am definitely going to give people more justice than I did originally.
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Deawsomepizza

@wanderingace I mean I wouldn't go too hard on myself if I were you. Your original entry was still really good. Maybe a bit of backstory would be good in a certain manner and maybe you could add some other things. Like more interaction with the characters (that could help and do some sort of justice.) Possibly introduce some more characters and more themes to make it have its own identity. I mean I'm just saying. You don't need to take what I mentioned and place it into your story. Anyways, good luck on the rewrite!
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wanderingace

Status Update: the rewriting process has restarted as I didn't feel satisfied with the plot, mainly because I want to make it stand alone without much effort, but have prequels and sequels.
          Also you may have noticed the very rough draft has been removed. Well that is because I unpunished it for several reasons. 
          1. People kept commenting on comparison to the Rainimator series this was an AU branch of. Since I am good friends with a lore expert, I am now fully aware of these fallacies. 
          2. I thought perhaps withholding the original draft can help generate demand for the rewritten version.
          3. I intend to post a teaser of the story when I am fully able to publish it without error, rather than post it with the original draft.
          
          On final note, the canonicity of my first draft is ultimately what pushed me to pull back said draft. Please respect this decision I have made.
          
          Thanks,
          
          WanderingAce.

Deawsomepizza

@wanderingace Alright then, like I said, good luck!
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wanderingace

@Deawsomepizza yee honestly that was the idea. I wanted to do better interactions and backstory. And I did definitely desire to have better themes and arcs that definitely would aid in giving it a better sense of identity compared to Rainimator.
            Funny thing... in my second rewrite (one I didn't show here), I didn't make Neaus all that threatening. He was just there, and disappeared after being defeated. So I am definitely going to give people more justice than I did originally.
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Deawsomepizza

@wanderingace I mean I wouldn't go too hard on myself if I were you. Your original entry was still really good. Maybe a bit of backstory would be good in a certain manner and maybe you could add some other things. Like more interaction with the characters (that could help and do some sort of justice.) Possibly introduce some more characters and more themes to make it have its own identity. I mean I'm just saying. You don't need to take what I mentioned and place it into your story. Anyways, good luck on the rewrite!
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wanderingace

Hello followers!
          
          So that rewrite is going great! That co author and I have done a great job with making the reboot! Just a few things to take care of and it is as good as published!
          
          However... I intend to publish this as an actual book and not an online thing like my old draft. I have done this with the intent to get more people's attention by doing it through another publisher. You can enjoy the old draft and the teaser for now, though.
          
          Have a good day!

Crazyboifighter

@wanderingace will there be a sequel?
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