Hey dear, I read your story and honestly, your emotional depth is amazing.
"If you don't mind, I’d love to share a small suggestion with you as a fellow writer."
I loved how you described Zhan’s anxiety—it felt very real.
The only small tip I’d give is to work on the paragraph flow; merging some short lines would make it read even smoother. Overall, you’ve got great potential. Keep it up! ✨"
"I'm actually new to writing on Wattpad, but I’ve been writing on AO3 for quite a while. If you're interested, I’d love for you to give my story a chance too!"