Yizhanforever0
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Hey dear, I read your story and honestly, your emotional depth is amazing.
"If you don't mind, I’d love to share a small suggestion with you as a fellow writer."
I loved how you described Zhan’s anxiety—it felt very real.
The only small tip I’d give is to work on the paragraph flow; merging some short lines would make it read even smoother. Overall, you’ve got great potential. Keep it up! ✨"
"I'm actually new to writing on Wattpad, but I’ve been writing on AO3 for quite a while. If you're interested, I’d love for you to give my story a chance too!"
Yizhanforever0
@Yizhanforever0 "I’d be happy to! Your writing style is actually very evocative and has a great emotional pull. Just that small paragraphing tweak we discussed will make it perfect.I’d love to stay in touch too!
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wangxian_untamed
Hiii I would like to ask for a favor from you that can you tell me does my recent oneshot story writing style is good or not and I'll surely read your books also I would love. To be in contact with you.....
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Yizhanforever0
@Yizhanforever0 "If you enjoy my story, feel free to follow me for more updates! I’d love to stay connected with you as a fellow writer."
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