Henry-Man

So it was once the advocate? Is it going to become "the lawyer" next?
          
          (Advocate is close to the italian word "Avvocato", which is "Lawyer" in English)
          
          I advocate for the name of "Prancing in Daisies", or "A Pilot's vacation" (since he dead), or maybe "Bob".

warcrimes_enjoyer

@Henry-Man I just realised  idk why it was 3 dots but I definitely didn't change the name. Probably just an error 
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Whatdoiputhereandwhy

Why’d you changed the name from the advocate to …?

warcrimes_enjoyer

@Whatdoiputhereandwhy I didn't. I think it was an error or something. Weird. But now I fixed it
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adamn_texan

WE NEED A DISCORD

warcrimes_enjoyer

@adamn_texan I'll put the link at the end of the last chapter 
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theratsatan

Your book was so good it made me download titanfall 2 and I’m having a blast reading the book and playing the game

theratsatan

@warcrimes_enjoyer I agree with you that apex is trash, and I hope they have the common sense to one day make a titanfall 3
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warcrimes_enjoyer

@theratsatan the server got doxxed a year or two ago. Should be back online though because it works for me. Lmao even the community lore is crazy for the game. The "sequel" to it is apex but apex is doodoo. So for now we unfortunately can't do much about it. There are titanfall fanfics that are good tho. But idk how many are on wattpad. "Tempest" comes to my mind. That book made me cry
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theratsatan

@warcrimes_enjoyer is multiplayer down on titanfall 2 or is that just my shitty Xbox because I’ve tried to look and i haven’t seen anything about it, also apparently they are releasing a game based in the same universe so that will hopefully be good 
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Hevreyer

Hey just wanted to say that reading your story and playing the game a lot made me want to do a titanfall story too! wont use any of the caracters you made and i wont steal the scenario of your work. but i wanted to do one since a while and you made me want it even more so thanks for the inspiration :) wont be as good as yours but i hope that i can make it good

Hevreyer

@warcrimes_enjoyer alr ill let you know. you might see some similarities with your story but it wont be a mirror dont worry lol
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warcrimes_enjoyer

@Hevreyer also make sure to tell me when you do make it bc I'd love to read it
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warcrimes_enjoyer

@Hevreyer yeah sure man. It also makes my day better knowing I inspired someone so go ahead. Don't feel too pressured on the first chapters bc trust me everyone's first couple chapters when they just began writing aren't going to be perfect but that's not an issue since it just means we're human. Just write how you want to and have fun and don't let other ppl discredit or hate on you. Also try using art for characters that aren't too popular and rarer. It helps the readers who've read multiple stories bc when there's 2 different stories with the same character art it can get sort of confusing trying to remember who did what considering the image and looks are the same. Ofc that wouldn't be a problem if you got an artist and got an original drawing of your character but if you use Google it would be good
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Hevreyer

Hey your book "Advocate" is amazing 

Hevreyer

@ warcrimes_enjoyer  nice... That's impressive to write that and with everything else going on around u
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warcrimes_enjoyer

@Hevreyer depends on how I feel like and if I want to write or nah . Normally it takes only a day for me to write a chapter (Including daily stuff like eating,  hobbies and studying and etc)
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Hevreyer

@ warcrimes_enjoyer  how much time you usually spend on making one chapter? 
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