Icebolt515
Just wanted to thank you again for your support for my stories. I did have a question for you. What did you think of chapter 12 in alliance? I want your opinion on it, as it has been the only chapter since the first you didn't vote for it. I'm not looking for a vote, but am curious to see where I need to improve. Thank for your feedback, Ice
warlord8672
Everything looks pretty good just a couple spacing mistakes but I’m not the best at giving advice I would recommend putting more tags on your stories so you can get more readers
warlord8672
I was at work didn’t have any cellular connection so I guess my vote didn’t get through but I really enjoyed it I like how you wrote the way you did allowing you to tell how thick the accent of the characters are