Watt A Critic

hey I was wondering if you would be willing to (not harshly) critique my book! I would be grateful enough if you read this and I hope you have a splendid rest of your day !

Hi. How are you doing? I would like for you to review my book and criticize it. Thanks

would you read the first chapter of my book "falling for him" n leave an honest critic? would rlly appreciate it 

Can you read my story just 1 chapter has been completed it is an intro

can you read my book and give me a type of review? its really short
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/77056396-from-me-to-you

Hey! Thanks for the follow! It would be amazing and wonderful if you went and checked out my book "Stella & Harry" Oh, and Vote and Comment as well! Thanks Love! 

@wattacritic  I deleted it :/ 

Yeah I deleted it :/ 

@Jagk_Barakat Well I don't see books and sorry I had forgot my login

@wattacritic  did u read it?? If u did can u tell me wat u think and maybe give me a few tips on how I can make it better