james_733
Hi there!
I just wanted to say I got completely lost in your story—it was such a captivating experience. It’s rare to come across writing that’s this vivid and immersive, where every scene feels so alive. It immediately made me think how stunning it could be as a comic.
Along with comics, I also offer cover art and character design as part of my commission-based services. I’d love to create something that truly captures the energy and essence of your story.
Feel free to connect with me on Discord at Eve_Verse_ or Instagram at Eve_Verse_ to discuss further.
Take care
Eve
death_riskygamble
Hello! I am a bit new to Wattpad. And I made my first book! I have read all three of your books! They are really good and I was wondering if you could give me feedback on how it’s going so far! If not it is ok! I understand if you don’t want to or you don’t have the the time! Have a great day/night!
death_riskygamble
@wattup3214 ok! I will be sure to use this feed-back! It will help alot! Thank you so much! I mean it, also your fan fictions are great! I kinda forgot to vote haha. But anyway, like I said before, I really appreciate this feed-back! Have a great day/night!
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wattup3214
@HockeyDragon183 Right, I can give you advice here if you don't mind then. Firstly, I think you need to proofread your work to minimise the grammatical and spelling errors in your chapters. Secondly, I think you need to make clear which parts of the story are conversation and the thoughts of Leo to make the chapter look more organised, and this could be done by maybe using bold or italic fonts to represent thoughts, and regular text to represent normal conversation and descriptions. Make sure you also touch on the appearances of how the dragon spirits look like and the other OCs you used in the book to allow readers to visualise how your OCs look like. Try to use contractions to make the story easier to read (like will not can be shortened to won't). Other than that, I like the concept you've implemented in the story so far. It's a very creative concept. I look forward to seeing how the story will turn out and I'm glad that you enjoyed my fanfictions. Thanks for taking the time to read them.
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death_riskygamble
@wattup3214 Hello! I unfortunately do not. I have never touched any of that kind of stuff my whole life! If you are not able to give me feedback because of that I completely understand! I apologize for this inconvenience. It has been a rule for my family so I don't get addicted to my phone. And It works pretty well! :P
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RWBYXFanfics
Hi, I was wondering If I have your permission to turn your Tale of Two Avatars into An AI story for Youtube, I already have a story up there so If you want to see what it is that I do https://www.youtube.com/@AICoverSongs-VF53
wattup3214
@HellfireMember55 Could you let me know when you release a video on it? I really want to watch it
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wattup3214
@HellfireMember55 Hi there, I'm more than happy to give you permission for you to turn my story into an AI story for YouTube, just make sure to credit me.
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kiaraykocho
Hi wattup3214 I really like your book Is through a triplet's eye but I was wondering if you could write it again but with a female reader.
your_fruity_writer
Hi, I'm new to wattpad and read both of your books. They look nice and was wondering if we would follow each other and you read my first book, also leaving a feedback, if you don't mind.
wattup3214
@your_fruity_writer Sure, no problem. I'm glad that you liked my books. I am more than happy to offer you my opinions and feedback but is it alright if I give them to you privately?
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Frankie_Leah
Hey there! I read your book today and so far, I love it!! If you can, update chapters when you get the chance and have time to! Btw, would you maybe be interested in following each other?
wattup3214
@Erica_2020 Hi, I am so glad to hear that you are enjoying the book so far and yes, I will update chapters when I get the chance and have the time to. And of course I would love to follow you. Thanks for reading my book and Happy New Year to you!
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