watty_critics

Will you critic my story? It's not done yet, but I still want advice.

I'd love for you to critique my work. I only have a prologue so far, but I'm looking for all the help I can get as I continue to build my story. 

Are you still on Wattpad?

oh...hello.

check out my book anti-social for a review thank you!

"Screw you,Alyssa" Mason said snarling at me
          I smiled devilishly
          "Yes Mason, i believe the whole class is already aware of the fact you that wish you could" i did a quick wink in his direction, and with that, I walked out of the classroom hearing laughter in my wake... 
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           Helloooooo, i was wondering if you could read my stroy?? It would be considerably awesome ;] And if you do... Thanks !